Talk:Barbeerian

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Excellent article. I've corrected some repetition & spelling mistakes (except where obviously dialect quotes). Edit notes below:

  • ...they got too drunk too quickly... - Changed to ...they drank too much too young... as an reference and inversion of The Specials - Too much too young;
  • The Culture section could probably be tightened up a bit more but I've left it as is so not to remove the sense of academic work.
  • ...and so became Spacealeians. - Bravo!

Will revisit a final time later on for anything I may have missed. -- S624 (talk) 10:27, 6 January 2019 (UTC)