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===December 2018===
*[[Lucky starfish]] grammar/spelling corrections, pleases -- "Fundamentally sound entry that has been lightly edited for SPAG. Main changes: pronouns are regularized to "it", with minor tweaks to spelling and grammar" -- [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]] ([[User talk:Cham Almighty|talk]]) 18:17, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
* [[JanuWiki 2019]] — Rearranged, modified for clarity. Awesome work, [[User:Djonni|Djonni]]. — [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]], 28DEC2018
===January 2019===
* [[Exclamation pint]] — Brilliant! Minor changes: added a couple of links where appropriate, corrected "Monstro City", one duplicate 'the'. Also, it seems the in-game spelling is "liana-eyebrows", so pipe linked. An excellent article! -- [[User:Djonni|Djonni]] ([[User talk:Djonni|talk]]) 11:39, 1 January 2019 (UTC)
::[[Exclamation pint]] -- Not really a writing review request, but  I added a crappy picture. If a reviewer can make the check and acknowledgement. Thx in advance!(yeah i love this formula) -- [[User:WardPhoenix|WardPhoenix]]
:::{{m|done}} :) -- [[User:Djonni|Djonni]] ([[User talk:Djonni|talk]]) 11:47, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Bear Minimum]] - Good article. Some corrections to phrasing made while hopefully keeping [[User:Terezka|Terezka]]'s intent. {{tlc|Hero or heroine}} template implemented & made change to 3rd person throughout. -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]])
* [[The Sword & Sandal]] — Modified some phrasing and capitalized "Godville Arena". A very "godvillian" take on the name, cool article! -- [[User:Holy Spirit of Hell|Holy Spirit of Hell]] ([[User talk:Holy Spirit of Hell|talk]]) 21:03, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Sit in a tavern and write fake diary entries]] — Triple checked that the templates and offsets were doing what they were supposed to do, removed one or two errant spaces in text, and swapped one “houses” version for the “temples” version to reflect both in GV. No matter how you look at it, this article is an amazing piece of work, and was a pleasure to review. — [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] ([[User talk:SourceRunner|talk]]) 11:52, 3 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Extra Dry Djinn]] — Not originally part of [[JanuWiki 2019]], but one that I’ve had my eye on for a while, and seems tangentially related (beer has alcohol in it, gin has alcohol in it, both are for internal consumption...). What do you guys think? Is it allowable? If so, it ''really'' needs a good grammar check, because it was written late on a sleepless night. — [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] ([[User talk:SourceRunner|talk]]) 12:09, 3 January 2019 (UTC)
:: Of course it is! Everything's eligible! And since I'm the next volunteer editor in line, it will be my pleasure to give it a once- or twice-over. -- [[User:Djonni|Djonni]] ([[User talk:Djonni|talk]]) 12:31, 3 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Bar tab]] - Not writing help per se, but have added picture to complete article & request editor for acknowledgement (feels wrong to do this for myself). -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 19:54, 3 January 2019 (UTC)
::{{m|done}} Good impulse. [[Nautilus]] joins the scoreboard!
* [[Beer Golem]] — Tried to be thorough, but there are likely many missed linking opportunities, wnd the formatting on the “transcript” portion is not the best, but I’m at a loss for how else to make it work with an indent. Please help. Thank you. — [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]]
:: I took a quick look... I should be able to come up with something. -- [[User:FeRDNYC|FeRDNYC]] ([[User talk:FeRDNYC|talk]]) 04:31, 1 January 2019 (UTC)
::: Many thanks. Will mark you as the editor of note for beer golem, under the assignments section. —[[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]]
:::: {{m|done}} Have a look. Technical notes left at [[Talk:Beer Golem]]. -- [[User:FeRDNYC|FeRDNYC]] ([[User talk:FeRDNYC|talk]])
::::: {{m|done}} Completed the text edits and added a picture. See [https://wiki.godvillegame.com/index.php?title=Beer_Golem&action=history View History] for a summary of all changes. Thanks for the fun assignment! -- [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]] ([[User talk:Cham Almighty|talk]]) 22:22, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
:::::: The author, [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]], has said she's happy with the edits, so I think we're finished. Yay! But, process question! Does this section stay as is, for posterity, or is it deleted at this stage? (P.S. We are in danger of running out of colons...) -- [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]] ([[User talk:Cham Almighty|talk]]) 07:47, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
:{{outdent|:::::}}Never fear, there are always more colons! (Something something about colons being like opinions... 😉) The {{tlx|outdent}} template allows you to left-shift a conversation thread without losing track of it :)
:I think that it's good for us all to see these back-and-forths, at least while we're still thinking and talking our way through issues as they come up. Let's keep the conversations intact until we clear out the JanuWiki edits from the page later on. (I know they'd be visible in the history, but only if someone goes looking for them, and out of sight, out of mind). -- [[User:Djonni|Djonni]] ([[User talk:Djonni|talk]]) 08:02, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
:: *dips into the colon pot once more* Sounds good to me, [[User:Djonni|Djonni]]. cheers! -- [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]] ([[User talk:Cham Almighty|talk]]) 08:15, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
::: — Writing complete. Review definitely needed for grammar, usage, and consistency errors, please. And anything else you happen to see. Thank you! — [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] 5:15 AM GVT, 1JAN2019
:::: {{m|notdone}} This is still open — I parachuted in to look at the technical request, below, but I'm not available for a full writing review I'm afraid. Not sure how to handle that situation, in terms of requests, but I'll remove the assignment below... point is, this is still up for grabs. -- [[User:FeRDNYC|FeRDNYC]] ([[User talk:FeRDNYC|talk]]) 16:08, 1 January 2019 (UTC)
::::: Alright. Thank you for all of your formatting work, [[User:FeRDNYC|FeRDNYC]]. I'll assign editing work to the next person down the list. So... [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]]. -- [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] ([[User talk:SourceRunner|talk]]) 18:34, 1 January 2019 (UTC)
:::::: Working on it now (thanks for sending me a note by PM, [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]]!). Text edits done, now working on an accompanying pic. Should be done later tonight. -- [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]] ([[User talk:Cham Almighty|talk]]) 00:37, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
::::::: Firstly, love your [[Beer Golem]] pic [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]] 😆 I want to say for everyone's benefit though that it isn't completely necessary for the creator not editor to ensure that there's a pic on each article, I think for the sake of our creators we should do the text edits first, mark the article completed, update the "Progress" sections, and then worry about pictures or add the article to the "Something needed" table. (I'm certainly not criticising you Cham Almighty, just making a general observation 😊 I think your pic is fantastic!) -- [[User:Djonni|Djonni]] ([[User talk:Djonni|talk]]) 11:22, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
:::::::: Thanks for the tip, [[User:Djonni|Djonni]]! I agree that sequence makes sense. Will remember that in future. -- [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]] ([[User talk:Cham Almighty|talk]]) 21:51, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
::::::::: {{m|done}} Editing completed and approved by author [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]]. Thanks everyone! -- [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]] ([[User talk:Cham Almighty|talk]]) 08:13, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[“Free beer” ticket]] - Writing done, SPAG check requested. Assigned to [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]] -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 20:09, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
:: {{m|done}} Editing completed (there wasn't a lot to do!). I've left some notes on the topic's talk page for author [[User:S624|S624]]. My gratitude to [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] for her feedback. (By the way, I saw a "not done" graphic in the first entry under Writing Help so was wondering if a "done" graphic was called for here. Feel free to comment!) -- [[User:Cham Almighty|Cham Almighty]] ([[User talk:Cham Almighty|talk]]) 08:13, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Ale-chemist]] -- Writing finish because I'm stuck on ideas...Probably need a big load of polish maybe more texts, SPAG and a picture (yeah i know that makes a lot...). Thx in advance! -- [[User:WardPhoenix|WardPhoenix]]
:: Assigning this to myself -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 20:09, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
::: I've added a picture! -- [[User:Shanimal|Shanimal]] ([[User talk:Shanimal|talk]]) 01:50, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
:::: Oh that's perfect [[User:Shanimal|Shanimal]], credit to follow when I finish the article proofing. -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 11:18, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
::::: Seems that [[User:S624|S624]] and I were falling over each other to credit you and your guild for the picture [[User:Shanimal|Shanimal]], great picture! (And sorry for standing where you're walking [[User:S624|S624]]!) -- [[User:Djonni|Djonni]] ([[User talk:Djonni|talk]]) 11:49, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
:{{outdent|::::}} No problem [[User:Djonni|Djonni]], the event's really took off, so the more hands the merrier. -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 12:47, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
:: {{m|done}} Review completed. Great article [[User:WardPhoenix|WardPhoenix]], polished & tightened up your base text, corrected SPAG & formatting. -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 16:46, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Beerkat]] -- Writing done, probably need SPAG corrections as usual. Thx in advance! -- [[User:WardPhoenix]]
:: I'll do it! Well done, [[User:WardPhoenix]] -- [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] ([[User talk:SourceRunner|talk]]) 17:15, 3 January 2019 (UTC)
:::Final review complete, and review tag removed per [[User:WardPhoenix|WardPhoenix]]’s approval. SPAG and based text tightened and adjusted for clarity. — [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] ([[User talk:SourceRunner|talk]]) 19:57, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Bottle of beer from a wall]] - Complete. Readability review requested. Assigned to [[User:Nabilou|Nabilou]]. -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 19:54, 1 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Beer-scented soap]] - Completed, SPAG & template review requested, assigned to [[User:Djonni|Djonni]] -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 21:20, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Barbeerian]] — Writing and picture complete. Possibly a little repetitive? Definitely needs spelling and grammar review. — [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] ([[User talk:SourceRunner|talk]]) 22:46, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
:: Assigning to [[User:S624|S624]]. — [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] ([[User talk:SourceRunner|talk]]) 23:36, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
::: {{m|done}} -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 16:39, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Drinkerella]] is complete and ready for review, though I feel like it could use something else, but I'm not sure what... -- [[User:Shanimal|Shanimal]] ([[User talk:Shanimal|talk]]) 07:19, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
:: {{m|done}} and marked as complete, with some ideas and suggestions if you would like to keep expanding it at [[Talk:Drinkerella]] :) -- [[User:Djonni|Djonni]] ([[User talk:Djonni|talk]]) 17:30, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Progress Bar]] - missing from this list but already assigned to [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] for review. -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 09:15, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
:: {{m|done}} Review complete. And now I really want to dine at [[Progress Bar]]. Edit notes are in the talk page. Great work, [[User:Terezka|Terezka!]] — [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] ([[User talk:SourceRunner|talk]]) 23:21, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
* [[Brewpid the Reindeer]] - Review ready (Article by [[User:Beausoleil|Beausoleil]]). -- [[User:S624|S624]] ([[User talk:S624|talk]]) 14:19, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
:: On it. — [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] ([[User talk:SourceRunner|talk]]) 23:29, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
::: {{m|done}} Review complete. Added some links, rearranged a passive voice sentence, and moved asides into footnotes. [[User:Beausoleil|Beausoleil]] expressed hope that someone is reviewing [[Beer Mugger]] too. -- [[User:SourceRunner|SourceRunner]] ([[User talk:SourceRunner|talk]]) 10:43, 7 January 2019 (UTC)

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