Talk:Exotic seashell

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First edit

  • Hello WardPhoenix, I've taken a first crack at doing a SPAG of your article. What a joy it is! It's tremendous fun, and the puns are wonderfully groan-inducing. In terms of edits made, they are mainly as follows: (1) your first few spelling instances were British-flavoured rather than American-flavored ("colour, odour" etc.), so my edits followed that convention for the remainder of the article; (2) I added a little more specific information to the introductory section (for example, it wasn't clear that Exotic Seashells always come from crates, rather than booty); and (3) I cleaned up the spelling/grammar here and there, added a couple of links, but otherwise tried to keep your highly entertaining article as intact as I could :) Please let me know if these changes all work for you! I'll do one more read-through at this before I'll mark this as finished, but in the meantime, thank you for a really enjoyable editing experience :D
    • This is perfect! Many thanks ! --WardPhoenix (talk) 15:02, 4 July 2019 (UTC)