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This is great Shanimal, and I've marked it completed and will give you the points for it now! :)

Drinkerella is complete and ready for review, though I feel like it could use something else, but I'm not sure what... -- Shanimal (talk) 07:19, 6 January 2019 (UTC) (at Help:Requests)

It's long enough for JanuWiki, and it's good quality, but if you feel moved to expand it here are some ideas:

  • I'd love to hear a more personal story of a Drinkerella's progression from perfectly nice girl to belligerent alcoholic monster.
  • I enjoy the strengths and weaknesses you've got, and would love to see more.
  • When I imagine your belligerent Drinkerella fighting, I imagine her being mouthy and rude, particularly when picking a fight with a passing adventurer. As long as you managed to keep it PG-13, I think some examples of Drinkerella trash talk would be fun, as a "warning of impending Drinkerella attack"!

Perhaps if you come back to it with fresh eyes after working on something else you'll get a second wind! But if not, it's good as it stands :) -- Djonni (talk) 17:28, 6 January 2019 (UTC)

Awesome, thanks for the ideas! I will definitely try to think on it! -- Shanimal (talk) 18:01, 6 January 2019 (UTC)