Talk:“Free beer” ticket

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A really fun article, GodS624 : short, sweet and punchy (or beery!). The picture is the perfect accompaniment, too. Great work! ☘ -- Cham Almighty (talk) 06:40, 5 January 2019 (UTC)

Just to clarify the nature of my edits to your piece. They involved a couple of straightforward SPAG corrections (it's --> its, that kind of thing), plus a spot of light reworking of 2 or 3 sentences so that (in my opinion) your meaning would be clearer and the language would flow better. I tried to keep my editing light so that your writing style would not be impacted. Explaining every edit here could take a fair bit of space, though, so if you have any questions about any of the changes, may I suggest you let me know here or on my own talk page, and I will be happy to go into detail. Thanks! -- Cham Almighty (talk) 07:39, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
No questions / issues with your editing GodCham Almighty . Many thanks for your feedback, at one point I was about to release this before inspiration struck again. -- S624 (talk) 08:30, 5 January 2019 (UTC)